Thnx Hrithik for ur detailed feedback, i ll work on it

Hey Manisha! There are a certain amount of things that I'd try to differently while solving the problem. I see that you have given all the addresses as well as the package no for the deliveries to be made. Think about it from the perspective of the delivery man. How relevant would these 2 pieces of information would be, when he is in a hurry and wants to see everything at a glance? I'd try to give information like distance to that place, some quick actions like navigation to that place, call button and sort all the orders in such a way that the delivery person has to travel the least to complete all the orders. Visually I feel the design needs to have some hierarchy in place. Currently the information is all over the place, the colors don't make sense to me. Improve the alignment of texts, icons, group elements together which are meant to be together and improve negative spacing so it gets less chaotic and easier to digest.

As my earlier feedback got deleted I would like to share it again 1. Why would someone want to get featured in testimonial? what will it bring to user? 2. Why is there form asking for user's personal info? It will demotivate user to give review 3. Why will there be lucky draw to post testimonial it is more like for giveaways

Thnx charmi Shah for feedback

Sachin vaish thnx for ur very specific feedback. I will implement in nxt challenge thnx.

- button text colour is less readable, making it white would be good. - Why you've put "Testimonials" in the Navigation bar ? people expect testimonials in the product page, not on the navigation bar. - your "Write feedback" icon looks like a video reel icon and a pencil to edit video and for video testimonial you can't use mic icon. that's for audio note which is not required as per the challenge. for 1st step of giveaway ; why are you forcing someone to buy a product, instead ask them to give reviews on the products they've purchased in the past.

Thank you Bijin job for feedback,i will improve it.

Manisha, your design is perfect ✌️, your design solved the challenge background u can fade more its little highlighting

Hello Leo Frederickson thank you so much for feedback. I will keep these points in mind in my next design.

Manisha, I will give you some feedback :) The first thing I notice is that you have provided the entire onboarding flow, if I was you I would spend more time focusing on the challenge problem and providing 3-5 screens that show the solution. You want people to see how you solved the challenge and not get lost in your design. Looking at the UI I don't think the green shadow at the bottom of the screen should be there. It's kind of random and distracting. With the nice pattern already in the background I would just leave it simple. I would add the size of the pizzas to the bottom left screen. Such as Small (8"), Medium (12"), etc. One little thing I would do on the map screen is make the map the entire screen with the navigation on the bottom. It isn't a standard pattern to have a map with padding around it like that. Hopefully tis helps, good luck! :)

I think my design is perfect😜 nobody giving me feedback..😆😆

Hi Kunaal i am hopeful that u ll keep sharing ur feedback on my upcoming design. Thanks

Hi Kunaal Thank you so much for encouraging me, i really appreciate ur kindness and hopeful that some organization will hire me soon .and definitely i will keep these feedback points in my mind in next challenge.

Hi Sachin first of all thank you so much for taking out time for feedback and honestly i want to tell you that i was not able to understand the challenge so i tried myslf whatever i cud do.and thanx for feedback,i will keep these points in mind in next challenge.once again thnx plz keep sending feedback in my upcoming challenges, all feedbacks are really helping me to grow as a uxui designer.

Sorry to say but I think you didn't read the challenge carefully. The challenge was to include an invoicing feature in the design tool itself, so that the designer don't need to switch to other tool to send invoice to the client. Though you made a good solution for invoicing, but it doesn't solve the problem. Even though, - UI colors are good, but you need to work on content alignment and padding (3rd slide) -

Hi Manisha, I think you have a great eye for color selection, copywriting and illustrations and I love the design to be honest. If I were to create a website, I would hire you as a UI/ UX designer to work with me as a team. There were some tweaks that could be made to further refine the design such as element placement could have been more precise (3rd slide: bullets can be aligned... and more). The darker shade of green (used for elements) could be set at a lower contrast to sustain the visibility and let the viewers connect the design with the yellows in the design. I loved the color palette used for the design and I think this is the first time I've encountered such a palette. Overall, I loved your work and would love to see more of yours. Also, I'd be delighted if you work on the feedback and come up with the changes I recommended. Regards, Kunaaal

Thank Hrithik Bokde for taking out time for feedback,definitely i will keep these points in mind from next time.thnx plz keep on shring ur feedback on my upcoming challenges.

Hey Manisha! Im happy to see that you are consistent and getting better at your craft. Although there are a few things I'd like you to keep in mind. Since this is the home page of the app, you should show an active state for the Home button in the left navigation bar. I see there are a lot of buttons in the screen. The ones on the left and the ones on the top. Try to group them or hide them under a category. For example- Settings can go under profile; Since there is a message icon on the very top, you can remove the one below it. Your 'dashboard' is supposed to be the home page so that is getting repeated as well. Try to keep only the necessary things and simplify the design. Everything else looks fine. Good Luck.

Thnx Shreya Badchariya iwill work more on concept.

Good try considering you're just starting to learn UI and UX. You've already learned how to use the software, now just need to work on the concepts!

Meenu susan Joseph thnx for feedback .from nxt time i ll focus more on white space.thnx plz keep on sending feedback on my work

Prathamesh Nayak Thank you so much for ur suggestions. I ll definitely improve my ui skills and i ll watch videos u suggested thnx plz keep on sending feedback on my work.

I think your still learning UI/UX Same as me but i started my journey way before you did so i will suggest you some topic go to you tube and learn about it first improve your ui What is 8 point grid and vertical rhythm https://youtu.be/rGq1GllRLjk see this improve your shadows https://youtu.be/Ng0ouZ2p-uo Note: This videos not belong to me

The thought process and research look good. Can give more white space in between for smoother eye flow. Keep up the work!

Hi Karuna thank you so much for ur feedback. Plz keep on sharing ur feedback on my work.i ll take cre of these points next time .thnx once again 🙂

Hey Manisha! The work is very attractive. Although the Map section is very confusing. A way to get the information about the car, that is its fuel and mileage I believe is missing. The word welcome also is spelled wrong :3 sorry I cant help but n otice these. But good effort!

Hi Saily Natekar Thank you so much for Your valuable feedback ,from next time I will take care of these points. your feedback is definitely going to help me, plz keep on giving feedback on my work. thank you once again.

Hey Manisha! I have seen your previous designs and there are some things you're consistently not doing it correctly. You have made a loading screen as well as a login screen. That's great that you're aware of making it. But how can you improve it? Pick one of your favourite app, screenshot the login screens and start tracing them on your design tool. You'll understand far more than just by doing than just looking at the screens. Try to understand patterns in them. Mostly everywhere tries to make similar things and not try to reinvent the wheel. There's a seperate principle to this, you can read about it later. I can see that the user can customise their exercises. But I am not understnding what to do just by looking at the screen. There are no labels, instructions, affordances that would guide the user. Try to make the toggle switch buttons bigger in size. They don't seem to be that clickable. Same with the drop down menus in the 5th screen. Now coming to your solution. I do not understand what is the exact flow of your design. The user is customising exercises and later on choosing exercises? I don't get it. Again, how did the the routine form. How does the user reach to the screen? It would have also been good if you could have added short videos for the exercises so a beginner would not have trouble doing them.

Thnx sunilsaran

Super

Thanks Monira Perveen

Nice

Melody Hughes Thank you so much for your detailed feedback,i really appreciate your effort.and your question is very logical that how customer will communicate? This was my first submission from next time i will keep all things in mind .once again thnk you 🙂

Hi Manisha! I love the visual design you applied -- the 3D images create a cohesive brand look. I like how the 3D images are positioned so that the lower half is on the pink background and the upper half is on the white. It's very satisfying! For the home screen, I think it's great that the user can select different categories. This might be easier for new users, as they can select a category if they're not sure what to type in the search bar. I like the idea of connecting with an expert because the user can receive personalized advice. However, I think the user might want more details about what it means to connect with an expert. When the user selects this button, what happens? How will the user communicate with the expert (chat, phone, email, other)? Does this cost money?